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Firstly, let me get my general opinion out: It's soooo freaking cute!

*Ahem* Now for the real critique.....

Vision - Your idea here seems to be a cute anthro girl. Pretty good idea it seems to me, haha.

Originality - I wouldn't say it is completely original as girls making cute poses is a common thing to see. However, considering this is a commission it might be out of your control. I will say I think it is unique how you presented her and the general shading of the picture (particularly the sweater, which I quite like).

Technique - Well I see an anatomy mistake. Her left arm is in a weird position. She seems to be squeezing it against herself to get it to her mouth. Try to the pose and you'll see what I mean. Her arm should be over her breast and her elbow out more. In addition, while her head is leaning to the left, the middle of her bangs is going to the right. Since hair grows from the middle of the head that split should be going to the left as well, between her eyebrows. Also her mouth seems to be crooked or at least going to the right a little too much since her snout is leaning to the left. Other than that the rests looks fine and I like the shading you have on her! I think it would have looked better if you added heavier shading to the wings, however. But otherwise the rests looks great and she has pretty eyes! Actually the first thing my eyes are attracted to is her eyes and face, which is really good. You always want to be in control of where your viewers' eyes are going first.

Impact - The impact is nice with this piece. She looks cute, but also thoughtful. Almost like she is kind of studying you at the same time.

Deviousness - This piece has some mistakes, but it doesn't take away from the overall look. It isn't the most original, but it still has a knack that makes it attractive and draws your eyes to it. Nice job!