..::COMISSION::.. Nythshade16

This is my first Critique on dA.
so here goes

The outline is very nice, clean, not sketchy.
The colouring is neat and in the lines.
The characters are very cute.
The shadeing could be in proved slightly but the fur texture gives this picture a smart finish.
The overall picture should be smaller for icons

The background is cute and works well with the rest of this picture.
All in all it a wonderful picture by a nice artist and i will be looking at your work in future.

(i was passing by and wanted to say something nice)